The fact sheet should have a brief statement about the problem to be addressed by the proposed legislation. The fact sheet should also describe the current legislation affecting the problem. The questions; “is the current legislature solving the problem?” and “how the legislature should be amended to solve the problem?” should be answered in the fact sheet (CFRH, 2020). Finally, the paper should briefly state the proposed legislature expected to solve the existing problem.
Peer Review – Leidy Poveda
In your project assignment fact sheet, a brief statement discusses the problem. I appreciate how you describe how due to COVID many individuals will become recipients of SNAP because they have lost their jobs due to the crisis (Gomez, 2020). This means that there will be an increase in food insecurity as well as even less access to food in general not to mention healthy food. You then describe the proposed policy goals. The main goal is to make grocery delivery available in communities that are SNAP recipients who most likely live in areas categorized as food deserts, for communities that are targeted by unhealthy businesses that sell liquor and tobacco. Finally, your thorough description of the intended impact if the retailers accept the SNAP benefits was clear; nutritious foods could help reduce the incidence of heart disease and other health-related illnesses.
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Peer Review – Craig Rijkaard
Your fact sheet begins by describing the problem in detail; the problem is the lack of school gardens in NYC schools. Your paper clearly explains how activities in an outdoor garden classroom bring abstract concepts to life through active, hands-on learning. I appreciate the experts’ opinions on the matter you included in the fact sheet before proceeding to the policy solution. You stated the proposed bill to tackle the issue; bill Int. No. 0578-2018 will ensure the establishment of an interagency school community garden team within the Mayor’s Office of Sustainability. It is clear from your paper that the outcomes of passing the bill include academic achievement and improved environment.
In conclusion, both fact sheets by Craig Rijkaard and Leidy Poveda successfully provide the facts and the main points concerning contemporary issues in the society. The papers further explained the proposed policy goals and their intended impacts in a way that was easy to understand.
References
CFRH. (2020). Fact Sheets - Center for Rural Health Communication Toolkit . Ruralhealth.und.edu. Retrieved from https://ruralhealth.und.edu/communication/factsheets.
Gomez, I. (2020). NPR Choice page . Npr.org. Retrieved from https://www.npr.org/sections/thesalt/2019/12/19/787465701/how-online-grocery-delivery-could-help-alleviate-food-deserts.
