Reviewing Presentations: Oprah Winfrey's speech at Harvard and John F. Kennedy's speech at Rice

Part 1 

Hello [Student name 1], 

I am glad you chose my areas of interest. I have always believed in the inspirational aspect of Oprah's speech. Her motivational talks that dwell on having more exceptional achievements from scratch are phenomenal. However, I would have preferred that you include notes on the screen for perfect comprehension. Maintaining eye contact with the audience, that is, your viewers would make the presentation excellent. Overally, your performance is good. 

Part 2 

[Student name 1] was the speaker, and the show focused on a historical speech by Oprah Winfrey at Harvard University. [Student name 1] is a perfect speech presenter due to her confidence and ideal pronunciation and assertions of the words. [Student name 1] maintained eye contact with the audience occasionally and applied an emotional touch through the tone in her voice. She further analyzed the confidence, tone, attitude, and overall presentation of Oprah's speech before concluding the presentation. The style contributes to a clear understanding of her performance. 

I believe the use of gestures as a non-verbal expression regularly will lead to a great emphasis on the presentation. There was a lag in concentration when [Student name 1] was reading the notes that were away from the camera. I believe she can change that by moving the notes near the screen for perfect speech and ease in reading. 

[Student name 1] was passionate about her performance due to her determination to pass a clear message about the need for handwork and resilience in achieving the goals in life. She applied perfect non-verbal communication, such as the application of the joyful facial expressions as she was uttering the words such as excitement. [Student name 1] also involved clarity in the pronunciation of the world to create a perfect understanding of the audience. She also applied the facial expression to stress on words such as change, and great. Since the speech dwelt on achieving greater things, I believe the emphasis [Student name 1] paced on such worlds contribute to a clear understanding of the subject matter of the speech. 

Part 1 

Hi [Student name 2], 

I am glad about this post. It is short and concise to the point. You have talked about the president John F. Kennedy's speech to speech at Rice University. The only suggestion I can make is that you should strive to maintain eye contact and be confident when you are presenting since facial expression and gestures define the emotional aspect part of a presentation of a speech of this caliber. 

Part 2 

[Student name 2] was the speaker in this presentation. She began by exchanging pleasantries, an approach that attracts the audience's attention. She also pronounced the words correctly. Before concluding the presentation, [Student name 2] provided perfect ways in which John F. Kennedy presented the speech. The act of mentioning the aspect such as keeping eye contact with everybody, connection to the audience, and an application of confidence defined perfect ways of speech presentation. The appreciation of her audience at the end of the performance contributed to her consciousness in the use of etiquette in a speech presentation. 

I believe [Student name 2] should improve on eye contact with the audience since it builds confidence in the presentation. Also, the eye expression should change with the changes in words since the speech presented a great feeling of exploring an ideal space. Facial expression and other non-verbal expressions such as gestures evoke emotions of the audience and attract them to a presentation. [Student name 2] should improve on such aspects. 

[Student name 2] was eager to pass the message to the audience of the presentation contributing to her style of clarity and pronunciation of words. Also, the inclusion of the non-verbal expressions such as gestures and facial expressions aimed at passing the ideal subject matter of the speech to the audience. I witnessed the facial application of confident but emotional facial expressions. I am sure she wanted to maintain one but a unique facial expression to avoid confusing the audience with different emotions and unnecessary emphasis using various gestures. Her presentation was clear since she pronounced the words ideally with a vibrant background for a perfect image.