Style: Paragraph
Justification
All paragraphs are written consistently in line with the topic of discussion and relevant evidence is provided. However, paragraphs on the literature review section are too long. For instance, on page 7, the last paragraph covers almost a page.
Style: Sentences
Justification
Proper sentence structuring is noted as well as the length variation which captures the reader’s attention and expounds author’s content.
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Style: Words
Justification
Simple and appropriate words have been used by the writer which makes it easy for the reader to comprehend the discussion.
Voice
The writer uses active voice consistently although at some point direct reporting is done while conducting the research. For instance, in paragraph one page 13, the writer writes as if the research is currently ongoing by using the term “will refer them”, instead of “referred”.
Tone
There is consistent formality in the tone of language used during writing which clarifies every point written down on the paper.
Reflection
Gradually, I have improved notably in my writing skills after attending literature classes. Am now able to consistently and appropriately use the active and passive voices as well as apply the right tenses during literature writing. In addition, I can comfortably write literature papers with simple vocabularies that are brief but precise and use a non-biased language. My tone too has also improved such that my literature papers consistently follow the given topic of discussion and are easily understandable by the reader. Furthermore, the literature classes have helped improve my eloquence during oral communication.
My literature writing strength lies in the appropriate usage of tone and style which involves choice of words. In addition, I can consistently write an essay or paper in line with the topic of discussion. However, incorporation of diverse vocabularies in my writing is quite challenging although, it is an opportunity for growth. To conquer this vocabulary usage challenge, I intend to diversify my reading interest from reading books and novels to including scholarly articles and other literature materials that are rich in vocabularies. Also, I will kindly request the instructor to make some recommendations on literature materials that will improve my writing skills and vocabularies.
